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The pie charts below show enrollment in different fields of study at a particular university. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show enrollment in different fields of study at a particular university. ldDEQ
The two provided pie charts indicate the percentages of students registered in various college departments by gender in Clydesdale University. The reported data is inconsistent in both graphics, with female students predominantly opting for Education majors and males preferring Engineering programs. According to the graph, the lion’s share of male college students is affiliated with Engineering, totaling 45% of the male student population. About a quarter of the students are involved in Social Science. Almost the same ratio of men, 20%, demonstrated interest in Education. In contrast, Humanities are the least popular major, with only 10% of men registered. Women, on the other hand, demonstrated the most interest in Education, with 35% of the female student body enrolled. Humanities are taking second place among the enrolled women, with 30% of students opting for the major. However, Engineering and Social Sciences are not preferred by the majority of female college students, with only 20 and 15% affiliated with the programs.
The two provided pie charts indicate the percentages of
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registered in various college departments by gender in Clydesdale University. The reported data is inconsistent in both graphics, with female
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students
predominantly
opting for Education majors and males preferring Engineering programs.

According to the graph, the lion’s share of male college
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students
is affiliated
with Engineering, totaling 45% of the male
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population. About a quarter of the
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are involved
in Social Science. Almost the same ratio of
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men
, 20%, demonstrated interest in Education.
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10% of
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registered.

Women,
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, demonstrated the most interest in Education, with 35% of the female
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body enrolled. Humanities are taking second place among the enrolled women, with 30% of
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opting for the major.
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, Engineering and Social Sciences are not preferred by the majority of female college
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, with
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20 and 15% affiliated with the programs.
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