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Process of making honey by bees and producing honey

Process of making honey by bees and producing honey J37gD

The diagrams illustrate some information about the stages in which the bee makes honey, and production of honey. There are 11 steps in these diagrams. Let’s get started by discussing how bees make honey. First the queen bee egg in the Honeycomb. After three days, the larva is made. Then, after seven days, the larva is completely grown. After three more weeks, the bee leaves the hive. This stage is followed by the act of gathering nectar from flowers, which is done by a bee. Finally, the nectar is left in the hive, and the honey is made. There are five steps in producing honey. The first step is removing honeycomb from the hive. Then, the honey is extracted from the honeycomb by a machine. Subsequently, the honey is boiled and cleaned. After that, the honey should be poured in jars. The final stage in this process is distributing and selling honey.

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There are five steps in producing honey. The first
 step is removing honeycomb from the hive. Then, the honey is extracted
 from the honeycomb by a machine. Subsequently
, the honey is boiled
 and cleaned. After that, the honey should be poured
 in jars. The final stage in this process is distributing and selling honey. 