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The chart below shows the process for fulfilling the work experience requirement for which the credits are awarded after the submission of final report

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Taking the given illustration into account, it is apparent that initially, there is application stage where student is given a approved list out of this he has to select workplace according to his choice and submit application. In the second stage, when student receives acceptance letter, he give it to it his professor for his consent. In third stage, working schedule is arranged for student and he provide minimum 10 hours to work. Probing ahead, it is vivid that in fourth stage, weekly report form is prepared by educator and provided it to his professor every Friday. The fifth stage, is related to evaluation where is student participate in a meeting with a supervisor who submit evaluation forms. Lastly, students are asked to submit final report before the last week of spring term and then the monetary benefits will be rewarded to them. Overall, it is clear that all steps are interlinked to each other. Omission of any can halt the whole process.

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