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task 1 leisure activities

task 1 leisure activities J37dj

The provided bar chart illustrates how many daily hours the youngest and oldest populations spend on leisure and sports activities in the US in 2015. Overall, it can be seen that while youngsters and the elderly spent approximately the same amount of time socializing and communicating, watching TV consumed most of the leisure time of both two age groups. People aged 75 or more spent more time relaxing, thinking, reading and watching TV than 15-to 19-year-olds. The daily average hours youngsters spent on watching TV were roughly 10 times higher than that on relaxing, thinking and reading. Meanwhile, watching TV consumed 4. 5 hours of the elderly’s leisure time, higher than that relaxing, thinking and reading consumed by around 3. 9 and 3. 5 hours sequentially. The amount of time spent on the remaining activities by the young was higher than that by the old. While there was a minimal difference between the average daily hours which people in the two age groups spent on socializing and communicating, the time amount youngsters spent on playing games or using computers for leisure was more than two times higher than that the elderly spent. Moreover, older people spent roughly 0. 25 hour on sport, exercise and recreation, lower than that spent by the young by roughly 0. 375 hour.

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