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The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. LrBG3
The bar chart compares the amount of free time per week that males and females of five categories of employment status had between 1998 and 1999. It is clear that men enjoyed more hours of leisure time per week than women in three out of five categories. However, only figures for women are shown in two categories, namely employed part-time and housewives. Regarding the full-time employed, obviously men had slightly more leisure time than women, with approximately 45 hours of free time per week, compared to around 38 hours for women. Obviously, unemployed and retired people of both genders enjoyed the most hours of leisure time. Moreover, the figures for retired males and females were exactly the same as those for the unemployed, at around 85 and 78 hours of free time per week, respectively. Housewives enjoyed 50 hours of spare time, a little more than part-time working women who had just over 40 leisure hours each week. No data is given for men in either of these categories.
The bar chart compares the amount of free
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that males and

females of five
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categories
of employment status had between 1998 and 1999.

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that
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men
enjoyed more
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hours
of leisure
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per
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than women

in three out of five
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categories
.
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,
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figures for
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women
are shown
in

two
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categories
,
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employed part-time and housewives.

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obviously
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men
had
slightly
more leisure

time than
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women
, with approximately 45
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hours
of free
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time
per week,

compared to around 38
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women
.
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, unemployed and retired

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people
of both genders enjoyed the most
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hours
of leisure
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time
.
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, the

figures for retired males and females were exactly the same as those for the

unemployed, at around 85 and 78
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,
respectively
.

Housewives enjoyed 50
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more than part-time

working
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women
who had
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just
over 40 leisure
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hours
each
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week
. No data is

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men
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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