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private debt and credit in the UK over a period of years.

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The above-given graph illustrates the information on the private debt and credit in the UK over a period of years. Overall, the private debt has had few drops and rise here and there but it significantly rose over one period whereas the credits have a minority percentage and remain to fluctuate continuously in the period given. In terms of debts, GDP has been between 60-70% from 1880 to 1914. However, in 1918 there is a major drop of almost half that is to 30%. Whereas it started to increase gradually but loans again saw a decline during the 1940s to 30% and later had a lot of fluctuations until 1980. In 1980 the debts have been same as it was in the first year which is referred as a thatcher. Later in the years it started raising significantly and reached the highest peak of 190% by low-interest rates, mortgages in 2010 causing a great recession. On the other hand, assets started at zero percentage and it remained below 10% until 1915 where it showed a great decline to –10%. Again around 1918 it peaked to 10% but drastically dropped to –10% in 1920. Later on, it just kept oscillating between 0-10% for a long period. Whereas in 1990 it rose to a maximum of 20% along with debt and later on same to 0% in 2010 and increased by 10% in 2020.

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