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The Developments of Meadowside Suburbs and Fonton

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The map shows the changes taken place in Meadowside village and the neighbouring town of Fonton since 1962. In 1962, both Meadowside village and Fonton were two separate places. A railway was running in Fonton from the East to the North. In Meadowside village, however, a small road ran from the West to the North. The developments started and by 1985, the small road in Meadowside village had been converted to a main road. There was also a road built between Meadowside village and Fonton in order to connect these two places. Apart from these, Meadowside village has gone through considerable improvements like the establishment of a housing estate, a leisure complex and a superstore. Now, Meadowside village is known as Meadowside Suburbs and is connected to Fonton. A railway has also been manufactured in Fonton to connect with Meadowside. Between Meadowside Suburbs and Fonton, the railway meets a station, with a hotel in the North and a business park in the South.
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since 1962.

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ran from the West to the North. The developments
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in order to connect these two places. Apart from these,
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has gone through considerable improvements like the establishment of a housing estate, a leisure complex and a superstore.

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, the railway meets a station, with a hotel in the North and a business park in the South.
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IELTS academic The Developments of Meadowside Suburbs and Fonton

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6.0
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