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Popularity Of Various Hobbies

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The bar chart provides information on the popularity of four different hobbies In 2000 compared to the present day. Overall, travelling and sports both became more popular over the period and are now the two hobbies which people prefer the most. On the other hand, reading and walking have lost popularity since 2000. In 2000, most people preferred to go walking as their main hobby with 35% of respondents choosing this activity. Sports and traveling had the same level of popularity with 25% while reading was the least popular pastime with only 15%. Things are different today because sports and traveling have overtaken walking to become the hobbies which most people prefer as 40% of respondents have chosen each. Reading and walking both suffered a decline in popularity with reading remaining the least favored hobby at 8%. Walking suffered a much larger decline in its popularity, dropping to only 12%.
The bar chart provides information on the
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In 2000 compared to the present day.

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, travelling and sports both became more popular over the period and are
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now
the two
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hobbies
which
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prefer the most.
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,
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reading
and walking have lost
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popularity
since 2000.

In 2000, most
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people
preferred to go walking as their main
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hobby
with 35% of respondents choosing this activity. Sports and traveling had the same level of
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with 25% while
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reading
was the least popular pastime with
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only
15%.

Things are
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today
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because
sports and traveling have overtaken walking to become the
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hobbies
which most
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people
prefer as 40% of respondents have chosen each.
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Reading
and walking both suffered a decline in
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popularity
with
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reading
remaining the least favored
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hobby
at 8%. Walking suffered a much larger decline in its
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, dropping to
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only
12%.
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IELTS academic Popularity Of Various Hobbies

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150 words
6.5
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