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Distribution of visitors to different types of tourist attraction in Britin,1999

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The shown figures illustrate the presentation of visitors in differs places in Britain in 1999. Apperently, most of the tourist visit either Them park or Museume and Gallerires. To start with the pie chart, Theme Parks and Museum and Galleries records highest vistors-- 38%, and 37% syncrotinesly of people. however, 16% of people visit Historic Houses and Monuments, there is a few vistors visit wildlife parks and zoos --9%. In addition, the table includes more detailes about tuirist presenteage in the theme park. 47% of vistors heads to blackpool pleasure beach, while 17% straight to eaither alton towers or pleasureland southport. The rest of the visitors visit chessington world of adventures or legoland, windsor with same presentage 10%. To sum up, most of the tourist go to theme parks to visit blackpool pleasure beach.
The shown figures illustrate the presentation of visitors in differs places in Britain in 1999.
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, most of the tourist
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either Them
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park
or
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Museume
and
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Gallerires
.

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Parks
and Museum and Galleries records highest
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vistors-
- 38%, and 37%
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syncrotinesly
of
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people
.
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however
, 16% of
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visit
Historic
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Houses
and Monuments, there is a few
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vistors
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wildlife
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parks
and zoos --9%.

In addition
, the table includes more
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detailes
about
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tuirist
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presenteage
in the theme
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park
. 47% of
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vistors
heads to
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blackpool
pleasure beach, while 17% straight to
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eaither
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alton
towers or
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pleasureland
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southport
. The rest of the visitors
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chessington
world of adventures or
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legoland
,
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windsor
with same
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presentage
10%.

To sum up, most of the tourist go to theme
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blackpool
pleasure beach.
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IELTS academic Distribution of visitors to different types of tourist attraction in Britin, 1999

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