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The table below describes the percentages of home-schooled students in SomeCountry in 1999-2004. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.

The table below describes the percentages of home-schooled students in SomeCountry in 1999-2004. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown. n0NK

The table shows the number of students (in percentages) that were home-schooled between 1999 and 2004 in SomeCountry. The data clearly shows that parents preferred to home-school their young child, especially Kindergarten students. The maximum number of home-schooled pupils were in Kindergarten in each year with the highest number 2. 9% in the year 2004. Grade 1-2 students were lowest in the number during this period - only 1. 2% in the year 2000 which decreased by 0. 03% from the previous year. The year 2000 also witnessed a similar drop in the Grade 5-6 students. The Grade 5-6 students almost doubled from 1. 5% in 1999 to 2. 6% in the year 2004. The Grade 7-8 numbers had a similar trend. Overall, there was a steady increase in the number of students each year, and each class had almost the same number of students in the year 2004. Similar to the previous years, Grades 1-2 students were low in number -- 2. 1% whereas Kindergarten students were highest -- 2. 9%.

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