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DESTINATION OF ANTHROPOLOGISTS

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The pie chart represents the career goals of anthropologists from a university, and table illustrates the monthly payments of anthropologists with five years of experience. Overall, the pie chart consists of six various destinations of graduates which are full-time job, part-time work, postgraduation along with partial-job, only postgraduation studies, unemployed, and unknown, whereas the table has three types of employees which are consultants, government servants, and private employees, representing their salaries. Almost, half of the graduates have done a full-time job, which is 52%, and 15% of anthropologists are working partially. The percentage of students that are pursuing postgraduate course as well as doing a part-time job is thrice of only part-time workers, which is 5%. Comparatively, graduates with no job, and postgraduate learners is same, that is 8%. Hence, the number of unemployed graduates is more than postgraduate students, almost 12%. After working for five years, only 5% of consultants and government employees, were paid in a range of 25000- 49999$, but almost 10% workers from private industries, got the same salary. The career opportunities provided by Government has paid the employees ranging from 25000$ to 100000+$, where almost half of them have got paid the maximum, that is 100000$. But, only 30% from private sector, and 40% freelance consultants were able to get 100000$, monthly.

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