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plan of a library in 2001 and 2009

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The map illustrates both plans of a library in 2001 and 2009. It is vivid that radical changes took place over a period. The original library had various sites. To the south was the entrance, the self-help area and the history block are located towards the northwest and to the east were newspapers and periodicals. Fiction region on the north. Lastly, square-shaped tables existed in the centre. Secondly, two sites self-help and history has been combined and completely demolished and partitioned into six blocks, namely, history, fiction, self-help, kitchen, economics, law. The newspapers and periodicals on the east have been completely removed and films and DVDs were sited. Librarian's desk, entrance and stairs remained the same. Square tables in the middle were replaced with rectangle tables. The fiction area on the north was redesigned into a children's book region. Finally, in addition to this, computers to the southeast and the children's play area below the children's book field have been added. Overall, except for the library's desk, stairs and entrance, the rest of the library had a major transformation.
The map illustrates both plans of a library in 2001 and 2009. It is vivid that radical
changes
took place over a period.

The original library had various sites. To the south was the entrance, the self-
help
area and the history block
are located
towards the northwest and to the east were newspapers and periodicals. Fiction region on the north.
Lastly
, square-shaped tables existed in the
centre
.

Secondly
, two sites self-
help
and history has
been combined
and completely demolished and partitioned into six blocks,
namely
, history, fiction, self-
help
, kitchen, economics, law. The newspapers and periodicals on the east have been completely removed and films and DVDs
were sited
. Librarian's desk, entrance and stairs remained the same. Square tables in the middle
were replaced
with rectangle tables. The fiction area on the north
was redesigned
into a children's book region.

Finally
,
in addition
to this, computers to the southeast and the children's play area below the children's book field have been
added
.

Overall
,
except for
the library's desk, stairs and entrance, the rest of the library had a major transformation.
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IELTS academic plan of a library in 2001 and 2009

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