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line graph of 3 spreads consumed from 1981 to 2007.

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The line graph indicates the consumption of three spreads (margarine, low and reduced spreads and butter) over the period of 26years from 1981 to 2007. Units are measured in grams. Overall, it can be seen that the intake of margarine and butter decreased over a period of time, while low and reduced spreads rose sharply. At the start, butter was the most used spread which was replaced by margarine during the years 1991 to 2001. With regards to the amount of butter used, it began at around 140grams in the year 1981 and increased steadily to the peak of 160grams in 1986, which then decreased dramatically to 50grams in the last year (2007). Likewise, approximately 90grams of margarine was eaten in the first year which fluctuated slightly and dropped to 40 in 2007. On the other hand, the consumption of low fats and reduced spread only started in 1996 at 10grams. This figure reached a maximum of just over 80grams in 2001, then it fell slightly to 70grams in the final year.
The line graph indicates the consumption of three
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spreads
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(margarine
, low and
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reduced
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spreads
and
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butter)
over the period of 26years from 1981 to 2007. Units
are measured
in grams.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the intake of
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margarine
and
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butter
decreased over a period of time, while low and
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reduced
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spreads
rose
sharply
. At the
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start
,
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butter
was the most
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used
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spread
which
was replaced
by
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margarine
during the years 1991 to 2001.

Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
With regards to
the amount of
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butter
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used
, it began at around
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140grams
in the
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year
1981 and increased
steadily
to the peak of
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160grams
in 1986, which then decreased
dramatically
to
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50grams
in the last
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year
(2007).
Likewise
, approximately
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90grams
of
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margarine
was eaten
in the
first
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year
which fluctuated
slightly
and dropped to 40 in 2007.

On the other hand
, the consumption of low fats and
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reduced
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spread
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only
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started
in 1996 at
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10grams
. This figure reached a maximum of
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just
over
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80grams
in 2001, then it fell
slightly
to
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70grams
in the final
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year
.

IELTS academic line graph of 3 spreads consumed from 1981 to 2007.

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