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Pie charts. Write 150 words

Pie charts. Write 150 words 1A2Y7
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of dwellings owned as well as rented by the residents in the United Kingdom in two different years. Overall, it can be seen that the number of houses has increased in the UK from 22 million homes to 27 million homes. Furthermore, the proportion of private renting remains the same in both the years. Looking at the sectors that have decreased, it is clear that in 1991, 23% of houses were rented for social purposes and this figure declines to 17% by 2007. In 1991, there were 6% of social residences, which slightly falls by 4% and becomes only 2% in 2007. Turning to the remaining sectors, it is evident that 60% of the total homes were owned by the people in 1991, and this figure rose by 10% over a span of 16 years and becomes 70% which is the highest value on this charts. The percentage of homes rented for private use was the same in both 1991 and 2007, which is 11%.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of dwellings
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owned
as well
as rented by the residents in the United Kingdom in two
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different
years.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the number of
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houses
has increased in the UK from 22 million
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homes
to 27 million
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homes
.
Furthermore
, the proportion of private renting remains the same in both the years.

Looking at the sectors that have decreased, it is
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clear
that in 1991, 23% of
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houses
were rented
for social purposes and this figure declines to 17% by 2007. In 1991, there were 6% of social residences, which
slightly
falls by 4% and becomes
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only
2% in 2007.

Turning to the remaining sectors, it is evident that 60% of the total
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homes
were
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owned
by the
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people
in 1991, and this figure rose by 10% over a span of 16 years and becomes 70% which is the highest value on
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charts. The percentage of
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homes
rented for private
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use
was the same in both 1991 and 2007, which is 11%.

IELTS academic Pie charts. Write 150 words

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