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People con eof o wide voriety of food of other regions. As o resulf lhey ore eoring o lol of loreign food insleod of locoill produced food. Do you think the odvonfoges of eoting foreign food'oie more thon its h

People con eof o wide voriety of food of other regions. As o resulf lhey ore eoring o lol of loreign food insleod of locoill produced food. Do you think the odvonfoges of eoting foreign food'oie more thon its h 2RN3J
It is observed that instead of eating traditional food, masses prefer to eat overseas eatable. while consumption of foreign food is helpful to reduce the rate of starvation, this essay believes that its merits are eclipsed by it demerits as it can create a negative impact on the local economy. On the one hand, shortages of food can be fulfilled by exporting of foreign food. This is because as there are lots of areas where the population of masses is too much and the chances of growing crops is less, due to this citizens who live on that place suffering the problem of scarcity of food. So to overcome this situation exporting food became a lifeline for masses and they have a chance to get varieties of food to fullfill the their requirements. As a result by masses live a healthy life by consuming nutrition food.
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instead
of eating traditional
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, masses prefer to eat overseas eatable.
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while
consumption of foreign
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food
is helpful to
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reduce
the rate of starvation, this essay believes that its merits
are eclipsed
by it demerits as it can create a
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negative
impact on the local economy. On the one hand, shortages of
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food
can
be fulfilled
by exporting of foreign
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food
. This is
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as there are lots of areas where the population of masses is too much and the chances of growing crops is less, due to
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citizens who
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on that place suffering the problem of scarcity of
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food
.
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to overcome this situation exporting
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became a lifeline for
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masses and
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get
varieties of
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fullfill
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a healthy life by consuming nutrition
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IELTS academic People con eof o wide voriety of food of other regions. As o resulf lhey ore eoring o lol of loreign food insleod of locoill produced food. Do you think the odvonfoges of eoting foreign food'oie more thon its h

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