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Pie charts about news accessibility in Gemany and Nigeria

Pie charts about news accessibility in Gemany and Nigeria A38kL

The charts illustrates the priorities Germans and Nigerians have in accessibility in news in their ordinary week. The differences these nations have are more prominent than their similarities. With a glance it is revealed to us that Germans first place to get their news from is newspapers with 45%, while Nigerians accessibility is little less than two thirds. It is apparent that both nations tend to get their news from radio, but with a tenth diversity it is more popular between Nigerians, than Germans. On the other hand, Germans third priority is the internet at 11%, which in comparison to Nigerians with 1%, is a striking inequity. Getting news from family and friends between Nigerians is only 3% less than other sources between Germans. Overall, it can be said that with over the half of Nigerians use TV to get their news in the first place, at 63%. However, Germans with 30% are less interested in getting their news from the TV than Nigerians.

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