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The pie charts illustrate in percentages the amount of water used for various aims in six parts of the world.

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The pie charts illustrate in percentages the amount of water used for various aims in six parts of the world. Overall, it is notable that majority of water used by the different areas was for farming purposes, while the least usage was for industrial aims. While North America and Europe used major part of their water, 48% and 53% respectively for manufacturing, the other areas( South East Asia 12%, South America 10%, 7% by Africa and 5% by Central Asia) recorded very low figures in that regard as well as domestic used too. Central Asia recorded nearly 90% making it the highest area that used water for agricultural purposes among the rest of the countries. While Africa used 84% for farming, South East Asia witnessed 3% reduction by Africa's rate. North America and Europe used less than 40% each of their water for farming. In comparison, while the four of the areas ( South America, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia) decided to channel majority of their water usage into agricultural, North America and Europe preferred to use theirs for industrial purposes.
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IELTS academic The pie charts illustrate in percentages the amount of water used for various aims in six parts of the world.

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