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The bar chart illustrates the information about the total value in billions of dollars import to the united state.it is depicted by a regarded pie chart. The data has been calibrated in dollars.

The bar chart illustrates the information about the total value in billions of dollars import to the united state. it is depicted by a regarded pie chart. The data has been calibrated in dollars. 5bKrp
To begin with, in 1988 the high rate of fish was purchased by Canada. Whereas, the other nation bought fish merely 27% then, the largest decline noticed in China nation which was closely 13%. Furthermore, after four years fish was brought by other nations exactly 46%. Nevertheless, a dramatic went down manifested in other there was 28% in 2000. However, fish import by China approximately20% in 1992 fish purchased 20% and in the followed year it was 28%. nonetheless, in Canada bought 34%. Although, a sharp reduction comprised at the end of the period which was 28%. To sum up, the maximum fish purchased by Canada while, opposite trend followed by others.
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there was 28% in 2000.
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20% and in the followed year it was 28%.
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of the period which was 28%. To sum up, the maximum fish
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the information about the total value in billions of dollars import to the united state. it is depicted by a regarded pie chart. The data has been calibrated in dollars.

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