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The map shows us that at present the small town has many spaces without building

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The map shows us that at present the small town has many spaces without building, and one possible design of what could be built to improve the stability of the town. In the first map it can be detailed that the town has three zones, a park with a small lake, the housing where the people live and a small school; in the town there are only two streets: Western Road (from north to south) and Park Avenue(from east to west). In the second map, it is the proposed development where it is proposed to build other establishments, taking advantage of all the available space of the town. The same two streets will remain, the park will be divided in two, one for a car park and the other for the lake and some free space. Also, the plan is to create two shopping centers(one smaller than the other), with its own car park and a small bus stop. All of this helps the town to improve the economy and there are other places para enjoys.
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spaces without building, and one possible design of what could
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the stability of the town.

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first
map it can
be detailed
that the
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has three zones, a
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park
with a
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small
lake, the housing where the
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people
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school; in the
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there are
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two streets: Western Road (from north to south) and
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Park
Avenue(from east to west).

In the second map, it is the proposed development where it
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to build
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other
establishments, taking advantage of all the available space of the
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town
. The same two streets will remain, the
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will
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for the lake and
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some
free space.

Also
, the plan is to create two shopping centers(one smaller than the
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, with its
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car
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park
and a
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small
bus
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stop
.

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the economy and there are
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places para enjoys.
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IELTS academic The map shows us that at present the small town has many spaces without building

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5 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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