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Development plan of a city

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On the first map this area from Springsby has no recreation and shopping area, resulting in no commercial activity and growth of the area. In proposed development there will be a bus station near the school, which gives convenience to the students to arrive at school and a car park beside a Park, for being a recreation area will make it easier for visitors. A huge empty area will become two car parks with a modest difference in size, and in addition they will construct two shopping centers, one larger than the other. All the changes will make the area much more developed for residents and visitors alike, becoming a leisure area heating up the city’s commercial business market.
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has no recreation and shopping
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, resulting in no commercial activity and growth of the area.

In proposed development there will be a bus station near the school, which gives convenience to the students to arrive at school and a car park beside a Park, for being a recreation
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A huge empty
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will become two car parks with a modest difference in size, and
in addition
they will construct two shopping centers, one larger than the other.

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much more developed for residents and visitors alike, becoming a leisure
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heating up the city’s commercial business market.
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IELTS academic Development plan of a city

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
119 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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