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pie chart elucidates how students in UK are capable in managing their finance and the table shows the number of student from different age groups who are well organized in financial grounds.

pie chart elucidates how students in UK are capable in managing their finance and the table shows the number of student from different age groups who are well organized in financial grounds. nd9GP

The pie chart elucidates how students in UK are capable in managing their finance and the table shows the number of student from different age groups who are well organized in financial grounds. Overall almost three quarters of the chart is covered by people who are economically organized and the population aged over 26 years are most adept in spending money. As it is illustrated in the chart, there are 55% of students who are fairly proficient in managing finance and 21% can handle well. Meanwhile, the percentage of those who are not very organized in this field is 20. likewise, students who absolutely do not know to manage expenses are accounted for 4%. Regarding the table, it conveys 21% of students under 21 years are quite tactful as compared to those aged up to 22 years. besides that, students between 23 to 25 years are competent comprising 26% whereas the older ones aged over 26 years are.

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