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persons arrested in five years ending in 1994

persons arrested in five years ending in 1994 aAQ3Y

The pie chart depicts the proportions of male and female arrested and the bar chart gives information about some current reasons for arrest. It is clear that men were more captured than women over the studied period. While the main reason for arrest was public drinking, the figures for no answer was the lowest. Looking at the pie charts, roughly a third of males were apprehended in the five years ending 1994. Meanwhile, only 9% of females were caught in the period. Looking at the bar chart, the percentage of women offenders public drinking was over 35%, which is the highest figure shown on the chart. Meanwhile, the proportion of men with the same crime was 30%. Whereas, only 5% and 7% of males and females were in no answer respectively. The same percentage of men (17%) were arrested for assault and theft.

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 were more captured than women over the studied period. While the main reason for arrest was public drinking, the figures for no answer was the lowest.

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 in the period.

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. Meanwhile, the proportion of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
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only
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. The same percentage of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
 (17%) were arrested
 for assault and theft. 