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Olympic champion league medals

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The bars chart describes the twenty countries that contribute in the Olympic championship First, The most achievable team in the league was the United State of America with approximately 2400 rewards including gold, silver, and bronze. On the other hand, Japan has achieved the lowest number of medals among all the other countries with nearly less than 400 credit where's china not far away from the lowest achieved country. In contrast, in European, the chart suggests that they are on the equilibrium level in competing with other nations. In conclusion, the champion of the Olympic leagues notably the USA with a huge number of medals. Europeans achieved lots of medals and if they were gathered as one rustic they would have defeated USA easily. In addition, Asian region are far away from getting lots of medals in the present of these two unbeatable nations.
The bars chart
describes
the twenty countries that contribute in the Olympic championship

First
, The most achievable team in the league was the United State of America with approximately 2400 rewards including gold, silver, and bronze.

On the other hand
, Japan has achieved the lowest number of
medals
among all the other countries with
nearly
less than 400 credit where's china not far away from the lowest achieved country.

In contrast
, in European, the chart suggests that they are on the equilibrium level in competing with other nations.

In conclusion
, the champion of the Olympic leagues
notably
the USA with a huge number of
medals
. Europeans achieved lots of
medals
and if they
were gathered
as one rustic they would have defeated USA
easily
.
In addition
, Asian region are far away from getting lots of
medals
in the present of these two unbeatable nations.
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IELTS academic Olympic champion league medals

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