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Olymbic Medals Championship

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The bars chart describes the twenty countries that contribute in the olymbic champianship The most achievable country in the league was the United State of America with approximately 2400 medals including gold, silver, and bronze. On the other hand, Japan has achieved the lowest number of medals among all the other countries with nearly less than 400 medals whearse china not far away from the lowest achieved country. In European countries, the chart suggests that they are on the equilibrium level in competing with other nations. In cunclusion, the champion of the Olymbic leage is notably the USA with a huge nuber of medals. Europeans achieved lots of medals and if they were gathered as one country they whould have defeated USA easily. While Asian countries are far away from getting lots of medals in the present of these two unbeatable nations.
The bars chart
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that contribute in the
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champianship


The most achievable
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in the league was the United State of America with approximately 2400
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medals
including gold, silver, and bronze.

On the other hand
, Japan has achieved the lowest number of
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medals
among all the other
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with
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less than 400
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medals
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whearse
china not far away from the lowest achieved country.

In European
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, the chart suggests that they are on the equilibrium level in competing with other nations.

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, the champion of the
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the USA with a huge
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of
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. Europeans achieved lots of
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medals
and if they
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have defeated USA
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Asian
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are far away from getting lots of
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in the present of these two unbeatable nations.

IELTS academic Olymbic Medals Championship

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
142 words
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