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The diagram below shoe the process of making soft cheese. Summrise informs by selctiong and reporting the main feature

The diagram below shoe the process of making soft cheese. Summrise informs by selctiong and reporting the main feature 2lKYo
The diagrams illustrate how the water supply system in Australia currently works and the plan for future changes. Overall, the most noticeable change in the future water supply system is the recycling process of water for use in the city. Looking at the present water supply system plan, pure water is stored in a dam before being transferred to a city to be used by households, shops and factories. From the city, storm water goes straight into the river whereas waste water is sent to the water treatment plant. After being processed, it is safe to be released into the river. Regarding the future water supply system, it can be seen that the storage of pure water in the dam and its usage in the city are planned to remain unchanged. However, both storm water and waste water from the city will be directly pumped to the water treatment plant for processing. After that, they will both be recycled back for use in the city. Also, there will be no water released into the river.
The diagrams illustrate how the
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in the future
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is the recycling process of
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for
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use
in the city.

Looking at the present
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plan, pure
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is stored
in a dam
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before
being transferred
to a city to be
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used
by households, shops and factories. From the city, storm
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goes straight into the river whereas waste
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is
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sent
to the
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treatment plant. After
being processed
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be released
into the river.

Regarding the future
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, it can be
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that the storage of pure
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in the dam and its usage in the city
are planned
to remain unchanged.
However
, both storm
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and waste
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from the city will be
directly
pumped to the
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treatment plant for processing. After that, they will both
be recycled
back for
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use
in the city.
Also
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released into the river.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shoe the process of making soft cheese. Summrise informs by selctiong and reporting the main feature

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