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table in ielts part 2 about moblike

table in ielts part 2 about moblike y7xW3

The table provides data on the market share of mobile phone producers for two consecutive years 2005 and 2006. In general, the figure for Nokia, Motorola, and Sony Ericsson market segment saw three upward trends whereas Samsung, LG, BenQ Mobile witnessed falls in their rates of the total amount of mobile sales. As clearly seen from the table, Nokia was the market leader, selling 32. 5% of all mobile phones nearly one-third of the total in 2005, and continued to dominate when increasing by 2. 5% at the end of the period. This percentage is bigger than Motorola and Samsung added together. Likewise, the proportion of market share that Sony Ericsson and Motorola held rose slowly to 7. 4% and 21. 1% respectively. On the contrary, the companies listed here had a much smaller share of the market, during the first year Samsung underwent its share of the market decline mildly to 11. 8%. Same as Meanwhile LG decreased tediously from 6. 7% to 6. 3%. BenQ Mobile’s was the lowest market share, more than halved, hit a rough of 2, 4%. Other mobile phone makers accounted for 19. 2% in 2005- Nokia but decreased sharply to 16, 2% in the next year

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share
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market
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 from the table, Nokia was the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadvertiseretaildisplay
market
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end
 of the period. This percentage is bigger than Motorola and Samsung This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
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, the proportion of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadvertiseretaildisplay
market
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share
 that Sony Ericsson and Motorola held rose slowly
 to 7. 4% and 21. 1% respectively
.

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, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
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share
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadvertiseretaildisplay
market
, during the first
 year Samsung underwent its You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionstakeproportionpartinterestdividend
share
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadvertiseretaildisplay
market
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 to 11. 8%. Same as Meanwhile LG decreased tediously
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market
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share
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 to 16, 2% in the next
 year