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The chart compares the number of female members of perliament in the UK,France,Italy,Belgium between 2000 and 2012.

The chart compares the number of female members of perliament in the UK, France, Italy, Belgium between 2000 and 2012. eEA6A
The chart compares the number of female members of perliament in the UK, France, Italy, Belgium between 2000 and 2012. overall, all the European countries experienced a significant increase except the UK. Italy started in the second position but reached the highest position at rhe end compare to others. In 2000, Germany started at well under 35%, which is the highest in that year, and remained constant until 2004 before increasing to well above 35%, which is the second highest in that year. The percentage of the female members in European perliament of Italy and France were the almost same at the beginning, but the figure of the Italy increased sharply to well under 40% in 2012, which was the highest. The contribution of France's female members increased gradually from 25% to 30% between 2000 and 2012. Belgium and the UK started at almost 3% and about 17% correspondingly in the year 2000. The contribution for Belgium increased sharply and accounted for 20%, which was same that of The Uk in 2012. UK's female members of the European perliament increased from 2000 until 2004, before remained constant in the following years.
The chart compares the number of
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, and remained constant until 2004
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increasing to well above 35%, which is the second highest in that
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of Italy and France were the almost same at the beginning,
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the figure of the Italy
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Belgium and the UK
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2000. The contribution for Belgium
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IELTS academic The chart compares the number of female members of perliament in the UK, France, Italy, Belgium between 2000 and 2012.

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