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The line graph compares the number of visitors to four different international museums from 1980 to 2015. Overall, it ca be seen that, the numver of visitors has been changed dramatically during the 35 years.

The line graph compares the number of visitors to four different international museums from 1980 to 2015. Overall, it ca be seen that, the numver of visitors has been changed dramatically during the 35 years. DYwAk
According to the line graph, the Louvre museums eas the most popular among visitors, with 8 and 9 million visitors each year. The least popular were the London Science Museum and the Shenzen museums with up to 4 million people by given years. In addition, the number of visitors to Vatican museum has increased significantly from 5 million to around 9 million by 2015. By contrast, the number of visitors to the London Science Museum declined from 4 million to approximately 2 million people. To sum up, the Louvre museum was the most attractive place by visitors, while London Science Museum was the least popular location to visit as the years passed by visitors.
According to the line graph, the Louvre
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visitors
, with 8 and 9
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million
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visitors
each year. The least popular were the London Science
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Museum
and the
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Shenzen
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museums
with up to 4
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million
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In addition
, the number of
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visitors
to Vatican
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museum
has increased
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from 5
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million
to around 9
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million
by 2015. By contrast, the number of
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visitors
to the London Science
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Museum
declined from 4
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million
to approximately 2
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million
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people
.

To sum up, the Louvre
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museum
was the most attractive place by
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visitors
, while London Science
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Museum
was the least popular location to visit as the years passed by
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visitors
.
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IELTS academic The line graph compares the number of visitors to four different international museums from 1980 to 2015. Overall, it ca be seen that, the numver of visitors has been changed dramatically during the 35 years.

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