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The pie chart shows the online sales for retail sectors in Canada in the year 2019 and 2020

Provided pie charts give information on shares of products in retail sector sold via internet in 2019 and 2020 years. Overall, it can be seen that online sale of electronic appliance doubled in 2020, while the sale of clothing decreased by twice. According to the first pie chart, almost 40 per cent of online sales in 2019 related to clothing, which was two times more than the share of electronic appliance. The second biggest share, which was a bit less than the third of the market share and exceeded the share of groceries by two times, belonged to home and kitchen. As it can be seen from the second graph, in 2020 the share of clothing decreased to 22 per cent, equaling to the share of groceries and surpassing the amount of home and kitchen wares by twice. The sale of the electronic appliances became the leader of the market reaching 45 per cent of total online sales in the retail market.

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 of electronic appliance. The second biggest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionstakeproportionpartinterestdividend
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 of groceries by two times, belonged to home and kitchen.

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 from the second graph, in 2020 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionstakeproportionpartinterestdividend
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 of clothing decreased to 22 per cent, equaling to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionstakeproportionpartinterestdividend
share
 of groceries and surpassing the amount of home and kitchen wares by twice. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
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