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The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.

the suppied pie charts summerise the information of online trade for retailers in New Zeland. Whereas, the comparison is held between 2003 and 2013, also there are four iems provided. Overall, travel scored wealthy propertion in both the years, meanwhile, books had poor part both the time. Additionally, as per both the charts travel and films/music were highly selected. To start with, shopping of cloths in 2003 bad second largest perecent by 24%, but after 10 years the point reduce by 8% and reached at 16% only, also it was lowest part of 2013 pie chart. However, the top most sold item in 2003 was travel with 36%, still the trade demolished and stoped at 29%. Moreover, sales of film / music were last second in position in 2003 at 21 percentage, along with sale of books was 2 points of film/music overtake evry other product snd had 35% also books sell overcome clothes.
the
suppied
pie charts
summerise
the information of online trade for retailers in

New
Zeland
. Whereas, the comparison
is held
between 2003 and 2013,
also
there are four
iems
provided.

Overall
, travel scored wealthy
propertion
in both the years, meanwhile, books had poor part both the time.
Additionally
, as per both the charts travel and films/music were
highly
selected.

To
start
with, shopping of cloths in 2003
bad
second largest
perecent
by 24%,
but
after 10 years the point
reduce
by 8% and reached at 16%
only
,
also
it was
lowest
part of 2013 pie chart.
However
, the top most sold item in 2003 was travel with 36%,
still
the trade demolished and
stoped
at 29%.
Moreover
, sales of film / music were last second in position in 2003 at 21 percentage, along with sale of books was 2 points of film/music overtake
evry
other product
snd
had 35%
also
books sell overcome clothes.
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IELTS academic The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.

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