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Percentage of the visitor to Scotland who visited Edinburgh attractions between 1980 and 2010

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The graph shows the changes about percentage of sightseer to Scotland who visited Edinburgh attractions between 1980 and 2010. proportion of traveler to the zoo fluctuated from 1980 to 2010 and increased sharply from 2000 to 2010 reaching 20%. Percentage of visitor to the aquarium rise sharply over 5 years previous, from 20% to around 30%, then it declined dramatically between 1985 and 1990. And gradually decrease to under 10% over 20 years previous. On the other hand the proportion of tourist to the festival up ward trend at a steady rate of about 25% from 1980 to 2010. Percentage of visitors to the castle, increased dramatically from about 25% to 45% over 15 years previous and then the proportion dropped gradually to 30% in 2010
The graph
shows
the
changes
about percentage of sightseer to Scotland who visited Edinburgh attractions between 1980 and 2010.
proportion
of traveler to the zoo fluctuated from 1980 to 2010 and increased
sharply
from 2000 to 2010 reaching 20%. Percentage of visitor to the aquarium rise
sharply
over 5 years previous, from 20% to around 30%, then it declined
dramatically
between 1985 and 1990. And
gradually
decrease to under 10% over 20 years previous.
On the other hand
the proportion of tourist to the festival up ward trend at a steady rate of about 25% from 1980 to 2010. Percentage of visitors to the castle, increased
dramatically
from about 25% to 45% over 15 years previous and then the proportion dropped
gradually
to 30% in 2010
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IELTS academic Percentage of the visitor to Scotland who visited Edinburgh attractions between 1980 and 2010

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