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The graph shows the number of total marriages, first marriage and remarriages 1951 to 2009.

The graph shows the number of total marriages, first marriage and remarriages 1951 to 2009. palj0

As per the graph on the X-axis we are provided with the years from 1951 to 2009 and on y-axis show the variation in first marriages and remarriages. The all marriages line tells us the fluctuation in marriages between 1951 to 2009. At beginning there was a period of stability from 1951 to around 1961 then figures started climbing back to 490, 000 in 1971, suddenly a sharp decline can be seen between 1971 and 1981, and again downtrend started with a moderate decrement per year till 2009. The trend line for first marriage saw a consistency in numbers from 1951 to 1961, when it started to make its record high with 390, 000 marriages in 1971, however it falls dramatically till 2001 and continuing the period of stability again under 200, 000. The dotted line representing remarriages showed a down curve from 1951 to 1971, although showing a partial growth in 1971 above 100, 00 and maintaining its trend till the end of 2005, at last the overall trend seems to go downwards.

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 with the years from 1951 to 2009 and on y-axis This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 the variation in first
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marriages
 and remarriages.

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 us the fluctuation in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmergerwedding
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between 1951 to 2009
. At beginning there was a period of stability from 1951 to around 1961 then figures This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 climbing back to 490, 000 in 1971, suddenly
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seen
 between 1971 and 1981, and again downtrend This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 with a moderate decrement per year till 2009.

The trend line for first
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marriage
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saw
 a consistency in numbers from 1951 to 1961, when it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
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make
 its record high with 390, 000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmergerwedding
marriages
 in 1971, however
 it falls dramatically
 till 2001 and continuing the period of stability again under 200, 000.

The dotted line representing remarriages This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 a down curve from 1951 to 1971, although showing a partial growth in 1971 above 100, 00 and maintaining its trend till the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of 2005, at last the overall
 trend seems to go downwards. 