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Total health spending under various heath care services.

Total health spending under various heath care services. 2Kmkk

The pie chart shows the different percentage of total health spending in various healthcare services like nursing home, prescription drugs, administration, doctors and clinical services, hospital care and other spending. As can be seen from the chart the biggest area of total health spending, which is 31% went to hospital care, while a sum of 23% belongs to other spending. Surprisingly, nearly the same amount which is 22% is spent on doctors and clinical services. In contrast both nursing home and administration is having the equivalent proportion of 7%. And the second smallest area of the chart diagram falls under prescription drugs with 10%. Major chunk of expenditure spending include hospital care, doctor and clinical services, all these services are directly related to patient’s mental and physical health, summing both we get the highest figure of 53% with majority. Adding rest other services we get the numbers 47%, this clearly states that services directly to patient took off major part of spending than that of others.

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