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The graph shows how the population of India and China have changed since 2000 and how they will change in the future

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The following graph chart compares the structure of population between India and China. as we can see India's populations are increasing day by day. in the year of 2000 there are only 1000 people. we know that China is a bigger Country than India so that time China's population are about 13000. the both countries population growth in direction. according to the graph chart in 2030 the both countries take turns in the growth of populations. suddenly China's population growth falling down. 2035 to 2050 during this 15 years growth of population is fall into 1400. but that times India growthing rate going upwards. the rate of the population went to 1500. conclusion, Indias growing rate of populations are much more predictable than China's.
The following graph chart compares the structure of
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India's
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the year of 2000 there are
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that time China's
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are about 13000.
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countries
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in direction.

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according
to the graph chart in 2030 the both countries take turns in the
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of
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.
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suddenly
China's
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falling down. 2035 to 2050 during this 15 years
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of
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is fall into 1400.
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that times India
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rate going upwards.
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went to 1500.

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,
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are much more predictable than China's.

IELTS academic The graph shows how the population of India and China have changed since 2000 and how they will change in the future

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