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Describe th graph staff training by four companies during the period from 2003 to 2006.

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The chart shows staff training by four companies during the period from 2003 to 2006. It can be seen from the graph, companies B, C, D have a significant fluctuation in training with company A have a slight change. All companies had increased their rising for 3 years with company D rocket dramatically to become second largest at 35% second only to company C with about 37%. While company A rise less with about 28%. Companies A and B have a fairly similar trends rising slightly in 2004, declining in 2005 then increasing steadily in 2006. In contrast, companies C and D have some differences. There was a substantial increase in training by company C in 2003 while company D fell slightly. In 2004 company D has a significant growth and company C gradually decrease. However, both companies rising again with C peaking at about 37% and D at 35%. Overall, it can be seen that all companies increased, although in different trends.
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staff training by four
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during the period from 2003 to 2006. It can be
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seen
from the graph,
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companies
B, C, D have a significant fluctuation in training with
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company
A have a slight
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change
. All
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companies
had increased their rising for 3 years with
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D rocket
dramatically
to become second largest at 35% second
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only
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C with about 37%. While
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A rise less with about 28%.

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Companies
A and B have a
fairly
similar trends rising
slightly
in 2004, declining in 2005 then increasing
steadily
in 2006.
In contrast
,
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C and D have
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differences. There was a substantial increase in training by
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C in 2003 while
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D fell
slightly
. In 2004
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D has a significant growth and
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C
gradually
decrease.
However
, both
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companies
rising again with C peaking at about 37% and D at 35%.

Overall
, it can be
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that all
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companies
increased, although in
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different
trends.
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IELTS academic Describe th graph staff training by four companies during the period from 2003 to 2006.

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3 paragraphs
163 words
6.5
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