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IELTS Writing Task 1: band 9 map answer

IELTS Writing Task 1: band 9 map answer pK1o3
The two maps describe how a small town named Islip is planned to change in comparison with its current layout. Overall, the town has been completely transformed after the constructions of several facilities. However the main road as well as the school and the park will remain largely unchanged. Currently, this centre has a main road running east to west with two shops on each side. North of the main road is a countryside area. On this road, there are two houses on the south side. A school is located to the west of these areas. There is also a park on the east side next to the housing estate. Both the school and the park are connected to the main road by two side roads. As can be seen from the second photo, the most noticeable change is the construction of a route around the town. In addition, the main road has been converted into a pedestrian area and the countryside and shops in the north have been cleared to make way for new facilities such as bus stops, car parks. built on two sides, in the middle is a shopping mall. In addition, there is also a new housing area that has been relocated from west to east, with a small alley connecting to the main road. Finally, on the south side almost unchanged, the shops have remained the same, the school has been built slightly larger while the park has been reduced. There is a new housing complex next to the park.
The two maps
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describe
how a
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small
town named
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Islip
is planned
to
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change
in comparison
with its
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current
layout.

Overall
, the town has been completely transformed after the constructions of several facilities.
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However
the
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main
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road
as well
as the
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school
and the
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park
will remain
largely
unchanged.

Currently
, this
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centre
has a
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main
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road
running east to west with two shops on each side. North of the
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main
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road
is a countryside
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area
. On this
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road
, there are two
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houses
on the south side. A
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school
is located
to the west of these
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areas
. There is
also
a
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park
on the east side
next
to the housing estate. Both the
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school
and the
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park
are connected
to the
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main
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road
by two side roads.

As can be
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seen
from the second photo, the most noticeable
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change
is the construction of a route around the town.
In addition
, the
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main
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road
has
been converted
into a pedestrian
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area
and the countryside and shops in the north have
been cleared
to
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make
way for new facilities such as bus
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stops
, car
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parks
.
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built
on two
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sides
, in the middle is a shopping mall.
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, there is
also
a new housing
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area
that has
been relocated
from west to east, with a
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small
alley connecting to the
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main
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road
.
Finally
, on the south side almost unchanged, the shops have remained the same, the
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school
has
been built
slightly
larger while the
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park
has been
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reduced
. There is a new housing complex
next
to the
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park
.

IELTS academic IELTS Writing Task 1: band 9 map answer

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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