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percentage of dailt intake if 3 nutrients.

percentage of dailt intake if 3 nutrients. GJEnx
The pie charts illustrates the proportions of the three nutrients (Sodium, Saturated fats, and added sugar) consumed by a person in the USA in four meals (Breakfast, lunch, snacks, and dinner) on any given day. These nutrients can be harmful if taken in large quantaties. Overall, the breakfast remains the most healthy meal of the day, contains the lowest amount of all the nutrients, whereas the dinner holds the position of most unhealthy meal, contains most quantities. Snacks have the highest percentage of added sugar among all the meals, whereas breakfast along with snacks have the lowest amount of sodium in all the meals. Dinner and lunch together contains most amount of all the given nutrients. Breakfast have lowest consumption of all the nutrients as compares to all the other meals of the day.
The pie charts illustrates the proportions of the three
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nutrients
(Sodium, Saturated fats, and
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added
sugar) consumed by a person in the USA in four meals

(Breakfast, lunch, snacks, and dinner) on any
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given
day. These
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nutrients
can be harmful if taken in large
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quantaties
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Overall
, the breakfast remains the most healthy
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meal
of the day, contains the lowest amount of all the
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nutrients
, whereas the dinner

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holds
the position of most unhealthy
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meal
, contains most quantities.

Snacks have the highest percentage of
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added
sugar among all the
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meals
, whereas breakfast along with snacks have the lowest

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amount
of sodium in all the
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meals
. Dinner and lunch together contains most amount of all the
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given
nutrients.

Breakfast have
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consumption of all the
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as compares to all the other
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IELTS academic percentage of dailt intake if 3 nutrients.

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