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Percentage of adult population attending paid events

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The table illustrates the proportion of adult resident attending paid events in the USA, Canada, France, Germany and the UK. Overall, at the first glance it can be seen that highest percentage of the adult population attending Cinema in all countries, whereas Sports has accounted for the lowest rate. In terms of Performing Arts which includes the theatre, live concert, opera, etc, 41. 9% of France adult people attends the paid event, which is the highest among all the countries. The participating adult population in the UK is also the second best(41. 4%), compare to Canada where people attend the least (31. 9%). 39. 1% and 34. 7% from the adult residents of the USA and Germany attends the paid event, respectively. Diversely, the proportion of adult people attending Sports has been accounted for the lowest which is under 32% in all the countries. People from the UK attends most on Sports(31. 1%), which is approximately 9% less than France.

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