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The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa. j3yM
The provided graph unambivalently illustrates the annual temperature and rainfalls on monthly basis in East Africa. Overall, it should be accentuated that the quantity of rainfalls and the temperature has a related association, they are directly proportional. To begin with, the temperature increases from 22 to 23. 5 degrees gradually by also the rise in rainfalls to 100 millimeters from only approximately 20. In April, there was surfeit number of rainfalls as it reached to 260 millimeters with also the existence of hot weather by 23 degrees which is one of the highest in that region. On the other hand, in May, both temperature and rainfalls seems to drop and the data literally tipped over in summer months, June, July and August. In summer, averagely the weather was 18. 75 and the rainfalls were 120 millimeters in total. Finally, the rainfalls were about 150 millimeters but 23. 5(the hottest month) and 22. 5 degrees in October and November respectively.
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unambivalently
illustrates the annual
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temperature
and
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rainfalls
on monthly basis in East Africa.
Overall
, it should
be accentuated
that the quantity of
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rainfalls
and the
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temperature
has a related association, they are
directly
proportional.

To
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begin
with, the
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temperature
increases from 22 to 23. 5 degrees
gradually
by
also
the rise in
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rainfalls
to 100 millimeters from
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only
approximately 20. In April, there was surfeit number of
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rainfalls
as it reached to 260 millimeters with
also
the existence of hot weather by 23 degrees which is one of the highest in that region.

On the other hand
, in May, both
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temperature
and
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rainfalls
seems to drop and the data
literally
tipped over in summer months, June, July and August. In summer,
averagely
the weather was 18. 75 and the
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rainfalls
were 120 millimeters in total.
Finally
, the
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rainfalls
were about 150 millimeters
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but
23. 5(the hottest month) and 22. 5 degrees in October and November
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa.

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