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Diagram shows the manufacturing process for instant noodles

Diagram shows the manufacturing process for instant noodles VAAA

At the beginning of the process, clay is dug from the ground. The clay is put through a metal grid, and it passes onto a roller where it is mixed with sand and water. After that, the clay can be shaped into bricks in two ways: either it is put in a mould, or a wire cutter is used. At the fourth stage in the process, the clay bricks are placed in a drying oven for one to two days. Next, the bricks are heated in a kiln at a moderate temperature (200 - 900 degrees Celsius) and then at a high temperature (up to 1300 degrees), before spending two to three days in a cooling chamber. Finally, the finished bricks are packaged and delivered.

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clay
is dug
 from the ground. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmudbrickearthterra cotta
clay
is put
 through a metal

grid, and it passes onto a roller where it is mixed
 with sand and water. After that, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmudbrickearthterra cotta
clay
 can

be shaped
 into You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
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, or a wire cutter is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
.

At the fourth stage in the process, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmudbrickearthterra cotta
clay
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
are placed
 in a drying oven for one to two

days. Next
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
are heated
 in a kiln at a moderate temperature (Consider using an n-dash (half dash), if you want to indicate numerical ranges or time ranges.200 – 900200–900
200 - 900
 degrees

Celsius) and then at a high temperature (up to 1300 degrees), This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 spending two to three

days in a cooling chamber. Finally
, the finished You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
are packaged
 and delivered. 