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people's habits of buying and drinking coffee and tea among the five cities of Australia.

The following chart illustrates the result of a survey about people's habits of buying and drinking coffee and tea among the five cities of Australia. Sydney recorded the highest percentage of residents (43. 8%), Who bought fresh coffee in the last 4 weeks. On the other hand, Brisbane and Adelaide have an almost identical percentage of residents for this option (34%). Only 43 and 38% of residents from Melbourne and Hobart opt for this option. 54% of residents from Hobart bought instant coffee in the last four weeks, While only 43% from Sydney chosen this option.
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(43. 8%), Who
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fresh coffee in the last 4 weeks.
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for this option (34%).
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43 and 38% of
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from Melbourne and Hobart opt for this option.

54% of
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from Hobart
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instant coffee in the last four weeks, While
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43% from Sydney chosen this option.
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IELTS academic people's habits of buying and drinking coffee and tea among the five cities of Australia.

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