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The graph below shows average carbondioxide (co`2)emissions per person in the united kingdom, sweden, italy and portugal between 1967 and 2007.summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph compares carbondioxide emissions per person in four different countries from 1967 to 2007. Overall, it is clear that there were significant change in the discharge of carbondioxide per person in all the four countries. While in united kingdom and in sweden discharge of carbondioxide decreased whereas in italy as well as portugal there was increase in the emission of carbondioxide from 1967 to 2007. As it is noticed in the graph the discharge of carbondioxide in 1967 was 10 in united kingdom which fall to 7 in the year 2007. While in sweden in 1967 it was 8 which slightly increased in1977. Then it slowly decreased yo 5 in 1987 which drop gradually by the year 2007. However, in 1967 the emission of carbondioxide was 4 in italy which increased mildly in the year 1977 and it increased significantly by the year 2007. But in the portugal it was 0 in 1967 which increased considerably upto 1997 and progressively it was 5 and half by the year 2007 respectively.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows average carbondioxide (co`2)emissions per person in the united kingdom, sweden, italy and portugal between 1967 and 2007.

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