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The graph presents information about the percentage of commuters using different modes of transportation in london in 1960,1980,2000 and 2010.

The graph presents information about the percentage of commuters using different modes of transportation in london in 1960, 1980, 2000 and 2010. WQpN

The given bar graph illustrates the information that how many passengers were using trains, cars, tubes and buses between 1960 and 2010. To begin with, the percentage of commuters who used train was 17% in 1960. While, this figure was hovering from 27% in1980 to 19% in 2010. As regards, the ratii of passengers using own private cars was 7%, 23%, 36% in1960, 1980 and 2000, respectively. However, this ratio had reached its peak point, accounted for 46% in 2010. Turning to the usage of time, so far as the proportion of travellers was concerned, it was manifested 27% in 1960. Likewise, the percentage of commuters showed an decclination of 21% in 1980 before increasing to 25% in 2000. In contrast, approximately 34%people used bus in 1960 but similar trend was observed in this figure, that was 15% in 2000 and 2010. Overall, although less preference was given to car initial year, bus had acquired popularity in london in same period.

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