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The give two bar graphs compare the ranking of medals which are win by Norway United States Germany Russia and Canada.

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The give two bar graphs compare the ranking of medals which are win by Norway United States Germany Russia and Canada. Overall, it can be seen that maximum medals are win in summer Olympics as compared to winter Olympics. However, United States win the highest medals among all the other participation. A closer look at the table chats reveal that in winter Olympics Norway gets the huge medal in all times followed by other candidates. It has gained almost same medals in Gold, silver, Bronze. It is noticeable that Russia and Canada have won relatively same medals, around 200 win by Canada and 190 win by Russia respectively. Meanwhile, United States has second ranked in winter Olympics while, Germany win 100 gold medals and silvers medals during the games. Moving to summer Olympics, United States is the least popular country for medals winners of all time it is calculated 2500 medals followed by other sports person. Russia and Germany have gained between 1800 to 2000 medals during the time period. Howbeit, Great Britain and France are the least popular cities recorded in medals winning
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Germany Russia and Canada.
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in summer Olympics as compared to winter Olympics.
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among all the other participation. A closer look at the table chats reveal that in winter Olympics Norway
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in all times followed by other candidates. It has gained almost same
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in Gold, silver, Bronze. It is noticeable that Russia and Canada have won
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, around 200
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by Canada and 190
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. Meanwhile,
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has second ranked in winter Olympics while, Germany
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100 gold
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and silvers
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during the games. Moving to summer Olympics,
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is the least popular country for
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winners of all time it
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followed by other sports person. Russia and Germany have gained
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during the time period. Howbeit, Great Britain and France are the least popular cities recorded in
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winning
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IELTS academic The give two bar graphs compare the ranking of medals which are win by Norway United States Germany Russia and Canada.

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