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Oil resources and consumed in the same areas

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This chart depicts illustrates the world oil resources and consumed annual in the same countries. In these table there are five communities they have oil resources (middle East, Canada, South America, Eastern Europe, Africa) these countries extract oil out weights the consumption. Middle East had 56. 52% oil resource and her consumed 6. 15%, Canada had 14. 84% and her uses 2. 48%, even Africa had 6. 38% and her using 3. 35%. In another side we have 5 lands them consumed is highest more than them needs, Asia the total of oil resource is 2. 89% and her consumption is 26. 21%, United States 1. 85% and World annual 25. 48%. In these chart we discover the biggest lands consume oil in the world her resources is smallest regions consumption her resources is highest. The compression here is there are a sizable cities catch on the world's in them hands and they receive oil from outside and there a poor suburbs in Africa and them oil products is max from them needs.
This chart depicts illustrates the world
oil
resources and consumed annual in the same countries. In these table there are five communities they have
oil
resources (
middle East
, Canada, South America, Eastern Europe, Africa) these countries extract
oil
out weights the consumption. Middle East had 56. 52%
oil
resource
and her consumed 6. 15%, Canada had 14. 84% and her
uses
2. 48%, even Africa had 6. 38% and her using 3. 35%. In another side we have 5 lands them consumed is highest more than them needs, Asia the total of
oil
resource
is 2. 89% and her consumption is 26. 21%, United States 1. 85% and World annual 25. 48%. In these chart we discover the biggest lands consume
oil
in the world her resources is
smallest
regions consumption her resources is highest. The compression here is there are a sizable
cities
catch on the world's in them
hands and
they receive
oil
from outside and there a poor
suburbs
in Africa and them
oil
products is max from them needs.
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IELTS academic Oil resources and consumed in the same areas

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