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The diagram exemplifies the evolution of equine species over the 40 million period , with its three ancestral species, illustrated by the modern horse and a clear focus on the morphological changes of the foot.

The diagram exemplifies the evolution of equine species over the 40 million period, with its three ancestral species, illustrated by the modern horse and a clear focus on the morphological changes of the foot. Q5AEy
The diagram exemplifies the evolution of equine species over the 40 million period, with its three ancestral species, illustrated by the modern horse and a clear focus on the morphological changes of the foot. Overall, all 4 species have a common trait of being quadrupedal, they have increased in size, evolved to have more hair on the tail and mane and having toes to a single hoof on each foot. The Eohippus which lived 40 million years ago, had four short legs, this kind of animals had small torso and its tail was not easily to realize. While the Mesohippus and Merychippus, which were existed 30 and 15 million years ago, had elongated tails and simple form of the mane, the height of these two species were increased gradually, but the overall stature of them were unchanged. The modern horse have the most evident tail and mane, the height and the length of body are about three halves of its oldest shown ancestors. The foot of Eohippus have four separated toes within phalanxes, while in the Mesohippus and Merychippus, the number reduced to three and the middle phalanx was enlarged, and starts to resemble a hoof. The modern horse’s foot has the fewest bony structures and the hoof has replaced toes.
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the
overall
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. The modern horse have the most evident
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and mane, the height and the length of body are about three halves of its oldest shown ancestors.

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modern horse’s foot has the fewest bony structures and the hoof has replaced toes.
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IELTS academic The diagram exemplifies the evolution of equine species over the 40 million period, with its three ancestral species, illustrated by the modern horse and a clear focus on the morphological changes of the foot.

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