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Number of medals won by countries in 2016 rio Olympic Games

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The rendered diagram is statistical representation which delineates on the top 10 countries that have won the most medals in the Rio Olympics Games in 2016. Overall, United States placed at top of the list with the highest medals included 46 gold, 37 silver and 38 bronze medals. While australia won the lowest number of medals in Rio Olympics Games in 2016. Great Britain held 2nd position with 67 medals and 3rd position was held by China with total 70 medals included 26 gold, 18 silver and 26 bronze medals. However, Germany, France and Japan were achieved almost same number of medals additionally German had higher gold medals conversely japan had more bronze medals. It seems that the rank was awarded on the basis of gold medals rather then totel medals
The rendered diagram is statistical representation which delineates on the top 10 countries that have won the most
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in the Rio Olympics Games in 2016.

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, United States placed at top of the list with the highest
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included 46 gold, 37 silver and 38 bronze
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australia
won the lowest number of
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in Rio Olympics Games in 2016. Great Britain held 2nd position with 67
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and 3rd position
was held
by China with total 70
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included 26 gold, 18 silver and 26 bronze
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.
However
, Germany, France and Japan
were achieved
almost same number of
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additionally
German had higher gold
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conversely
japan had more bronze medals.

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was awarded
on the basis of gold
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IELTS academic Number of medals won by countries in 2016 rio Olympic Games

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