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The charts compares us divorces and marriages in U. S. A. and marital status on 1970 to 2000. Overall, it shows us weddings popularity slightly decreased time by time. At the first chart, people in U. S. A. marriage average stabilized between the given dates. In 1970 divorces is 1 million whereas in 1980 it's approximately 1. 5 million. Between 1990 and 2000 weddings slowly dropped to about 2. 3 million and 2 million respectively. At the same time divorces aldo decreased to 1. 1 million and 1 million each. At the second chart, it gives us 4 different marital status. Never married people climbed to %15 to %20. Married people fell to %70 to %59. Widowed gradually declined between this years. In 1970 divorced people are %2 and in 2000 it's rocketed to %9.
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climbed to %15 to %20. Married
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are %2 and in 2000 it's rocketed to %9.
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IELTS academic number of marriages and divorces in usa

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