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Number of happy student in the MT Class vs days

Number of happy student in the MT Class vs days NMjb0
This line graph ellabroate the happy students who were participated to the MT Class in daily over the 25 days. As per the given line graph, first eight days, the happiest participants flactuvated to 2 to 10. Beging of the period, highest was the ten and end of the 8 days it was two. 8th to 14th time, it was two and remained consistantly as it is. In the end of timeline, student who were happily joined to the class, gradually increased from two to twenty in 20th day and it was the peak level on the given timeline. After the 20th day, It was dramastically decline to the two student and timeline end up with number of six happiest students. In the overall, as a average two or more happy student were participated to the MT Class during the 25 days.
This line graph
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ellabroate
the happy
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students
who were
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participated to
the MT
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Class
in daily over the 25 days. As per the
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given
line graph,
first
eight days, the happiest participants
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flactuvated
to 2 to 10.
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Beging
of the period, highest was the ten and
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end
of the 8 days it was two. 8th to 14th time, it was two and remained
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consistantly
as it is. In the
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end
of timeline,
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student
who were
happily
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joined
to the
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class
,
gradually
increased from two to twenty in 20th day and it was the peak level on the
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given
timeline. After the 20th day, It was
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dramastically
decline to the two
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student
and timeline
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end
up with number of six happiest
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students
. In the
overall
, as
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a
average two or more happy
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student
were
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participated to
the MT
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Class
during the 25 days.

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