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Graphics about the number of local and overseas students in Australia through the years.

Graphics about the number of local and overseas students in Australia through the years. NMjOy
this both graphs show us the students overseas and local that are going or are studing in Australian universities, this values are over a ten year period, morover this grsphs has two differents about the students that are commencing this process of study and the full amount of it. we could see in the Overseas's graph, the incrementon of the students between 2001 to 2010 in those years the changed was biggest than the amount in the Local's graph, however; the number of students in the Local's graph on 2001 is highter than the amount of students that came abroud. the values since 2007 to 2010 in the Local's graph, didn't change its total of estudents, therefore; the amount of students that were from Australia was the same for 3 years, but in the Overseas's graph the move of students grow up throught the years, whereby we could say, that the incremention would be higher in the Overseas students than the local students with the time.
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